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Blogging about Daily Life

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Haikus (Sept. 25)

9/25/2014

5 Comments

 
Picture
The leaves change,
The wind, too
So do I.

Falling to the ground,
Slowly but surely, 
the fun is gone.

Seasons change,
So do the trees,
But you shouldn't.

Burnt orange, 
Bright yellow,
It's a feast soon.

5 Comments
max
09/26/2014 9:26am

good haikus pat. You did well using the strategies

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Lucas
10/01/2014 8:20am

Great Haikus!

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Alexander Sheikh
10/03/2014 7:36pm

WOW I was living those Haikus! Its amazing how I could picture the scene just from the words.

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Adam J
10/04/2014 1:31pm

Great Haiku's Patrick. These are some really good Haiku's I have seen and maybe even some of the better ones. Great job. My favorite is probably the first one.

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Reid
10/04/2014 5:04pm

Nice haikus. I really enjoyed those.

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